This reminds me of the part of my book from Margaret's point of view. Margaret is always sitting on the stairs watching everyone at the beach, and writing entries. I picked this picture with no one in it because although the beach is regularly packed with people. Margaret feels very lonely this is a reflection of how Margaret feels alone despite the fact that she's on a crowded beach, filled with people. She's a prisoner of her own body.
You made a very good connection between your main character and your picture of the beach.
ReplyDeletemargaret sounds like a shy charachter who doesn't talk to many people but the picture of the beach and your post was a good connection
ReplyDeleteThis post is good at telling me what margrets charactersics are and it feels like there could be a bit more about her but it is still a good post
ReplyDeletethe text beside the picture is really well writen and it fits perfectly with the photo but you have to get caught up on blog posts
ReplyDeletethat's a great picture choice for what you were talking about. This post is more thought out and well finished
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